Love In the Making

you took my heart; 
treated it so well;
from what i thought was the start;
i was so wrong you brought me down from heaven to hell;
you lied about me;
and proved me right;
and i had you figured out down to a tee;
i never wanted things to end in a fight;
why would you lie; 
why not just tell the truth;
now things are going to end, you win, there is no tie;
there is nothing you can do to soothe my heart;
it is burning and nothing is left;
but the silly little ashes of memories that i thought we had;
just sift through the junk;
this is pretty sad;
that im in agonizing pain;
to the point where i wanna scream;
why am i in so much pain;
why did you do this, don't you think it was mean;
just leave me alone;
please let me live; 
i just wanna breathe;
and stop all this pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 22, 2016 at 10:12 PM
CASSIEE, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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May 17, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative poetry tonight with its interesting theme on luv ..my favorite subject.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv..
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