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Love In the Layers

Tell a simple story, so I can understand something not too boring, and very, very grand Ah, child there’s nothing simple about living as God planned. Learn to love the layers, and cherish every strand.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:00:00 AM

A belated congratulations Debbie on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2011 1:19:00 PM

Debs I got halfway thru this list and realized I had congratulated all the winners already, like two weeks ago or something. good grief. well, I know there is SOME list of his I have not congratulaed from a week or two ago. I hope I can figure out which it was!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2011 1:20:00 PM

oh,my gosh, I read what I said in my first congrats and it is like what I said the second time. It just goes to prove, we always tend to think the same no matter when it is we voice our thoughts!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2011 1:11:00 PM

wow, so far, my very favorite, Debs. Congraulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 9:05:00 PM

i knew it, debs!! well, this ain;t the" alway you..." really unique with big cheers for the win... yeoww! :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/25/2011 9:11:00 AM

hey everyone including ME missed my booboo on the to/too okies Debbie go fix it ;) HUGS nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/24/2011 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Debbie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 2:01:00 PM

wow, deb, this is absolutely wonderful. I think my favorite so far!! congratulations. LUv,andrea

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/24/2011 3:06:00 PM

Thanks Andie it came to me at church ;).

Cory Long

Date: 5/24/2011 11:51:00 AM

congrats on your win. cory

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/24/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congrats on 2nd Place, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/24/2011 11:01:00 AM

wonderful piece Debbie, love it, congrats on your win................Francine

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2011 10:01:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Debbie : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 9:13:00 AM

Beautifully written and quite profound, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/23/2011 10:00:00 AM

Debbie all I can say is Wow!!! This is a definite fav, absolutely love the message in this write of yours..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/23/2011 8:41:00 AM

Like a tapestry...every lil strand! Nice write for a Monday morning and a hot cuppa java. Hey Deb-Hope I can start writing something on Thursday after I am done writing a huge paper for skool....Could you assign me a form...be gentle....I am time constrained and s...l...o...w! ha. Take care, Gwendolen

Soulfire

Date: 5/23/2011 8:28:00 AM

beautiful.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/23/2011 8:27:00 AM

This is a wonderful write Deb. Thank you for your wishes. I worked and then had supper at our sons. love phyl

Cory Long

Date: 5/23/2011 6:42:00 AM

this is wonderful I loved the last line.. cory

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/22/2011 10:10:00 PM

* “Smile * To Take This Flesh of Chains * Which In Absolute Truth It Is * And Invest Joy & Happiness & Dreams & All * Into Its Illusional Vapour Amid Time * Makes Myself Smile * As In My Mind * I Cast It Into The Faraway Winds. * Dear Gifted & Beautiful * Beyond Beautiful Debbie Guzzi. * Again As A Moment Ago * I Find Beauty In The Voice of Versed Compassion. * Very Lovely * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/22/2011 5:35:00 PM

Very nice.Really like this one....Sincerely,Kacey