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Love In the Layers

Tell a simple story, so I can understand
something not too boring, and very, very grand
Ah, child there’s nothing simple about living as God planned.
Learn to love the layers, and cherish every strand.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 30, 2011 at 5:00 AM

A belated congratulations Debbie on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Debs I got halfway thru this list and realized I had congratulated all the winners already, like two weeks ago or something. good grief. well, I know there is SOME list of his I have not congratulaed from a week or two ago. I hope I can figure out which it was!

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2011 at 1:20 PM

oh,my gosh, I read what I said in my first congrats and it is like what I said the second time. It just goes to prove, we always tend to think the same no matter when it is we voice our thoughts!

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2011 at 1:11 PM

wow, so far, my very favorite, Debs. Congraulations!

Nette Onclaud

May 24, 2011 at 9:05 PM

i knew it, debs!! well, this ain;t the" alway you..." really unique with big cheers for the win... yeoww! :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

May 25, 2011 at 9:11 AM

hey everyone including ME missed my booboo on the to/too okies Debbie go fix it ;) HUGS nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 24, 2011 at 2:11 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Debbie

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2011 at 2:01 PM

wow, deb, this is absolutely wonderful. I think my favorite so far!! congratulations. LUv,andrea

Debbie Guzzi

May 24, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Thanks Andie it came to me at church ;).

Cory Long

May 24, 2011 at 11:51 AM

congrats on your win. cory

Ralph Taylor

May 24, 2011 at 11:19 AM

Congrats on 2nd Place, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts

May 24, 2011 at 11:01 AM

wonderful piece Debbie, love it, congrats on your win................Francine

Jack Horne

May 24, 2011 at 10:01 AM

Many congrats on your win, Debbie : )

Carolyn Devonshire

May 24, 2011 at 9:13 AM

Beautifully written and quite profound, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

May 23, 2011 at 10:00 AM

Debbie all I can say is Wow!!! This is a definite fav, absolutely love the message in this write of yours..

Gwendolen Song

May 23, 2011 at 8:41 AM

Like a tapestry...every lil strand! Nice write for a Monday morning and a hot cuppa java. Hey Deb-Hope I can start writing something on Thursday after I am done writing a huge paper for skool....Could you assign me a form...be gentle....I am time constrained and s...l...o...w! ha. Take care, Gwendolen

Soulfire

May 23, 2011 at 8:28 AM

beautiful.

Phyllis Babcock

May 23, 2011 at 8:27 AM

This is a wonderful write Deb. Thank you for your wishes. I worked and then had supper at our sons. love phyl

Cory Long

May 23, 2011 at 6:42 AM

this is wonderful I loved the last line.. cory

Sarah Seraphin

May 22, 2011 at 10:10 PM

* “Smile * To Take This Flesh of Chains * Which In Absolute Truth It Is * And Invest Joy & Happiness & Dreams & All * Into Its Illusional Vapour Amid Time * Makes Myself Smile * As In My Mind * I Cast It Into The Faraway Winds. * Dear Gifted & Beautiful * Beyond Beautiful Debbie Guzzi. * Again As A Moment Ago * I Find Beauty In The Voice of Versed Compassion. * Very Lovely * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *