Noel Villarosa Poet Shape

Love In Square

20 February 2010

Love In Square
By: Noel N. Villarosa


 
Love, in time grows to pure ------------------------------------------------------ LOVE
Is it just friendly, sympathy, or affection that I feel it ------------------------- IS
In urge of belongingness, kindness, and moments that I feel with ---------- IN
This is the greatest gift to  live and die with ------------------------------------ THIS
Square competition in the name of love, you need to -------------------------SQUARE

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June 1, 2010 at 1:17 PM What a wonderful message in this poem. Nice use of this challenging form. The last line has me smiling. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

February 28, 2010 at 10:41 AM Nice message in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Iolanda Scripca February 23, 2010 at 1:25 AM Great End Line Word poem you penned here, dear Noel. Thank you for your comments. Love, Iolanda

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2010 at 9:19 PM well, yes, and it looks like a rectangle too! HI, how are you Noel? I like how you are trying out this contest. I wish you luck in it! Luv, Andrea

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 20, 2010 at 6:09 PM Dear Noel, Bravo Excellent in Form and the end words explain the POEM You have Captured the essence of this Style I am really Proud of YOU Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments and Support to Dane and myself in Establishing the " End Line Word " as a Form of True POETRY YOUR POETRY FRIEND ALWAYS...HG

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 20, 2010 at 4:56 PM Hehe, interesting write. I think you squared it. :) Good luck on the contest. Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2010 at 6:53 AM Terrific Noel and a great entry.. good luck in the new contest.. my entry is Fairy Tales if u care to read and comment... thankxxx for your special and most uplifting comments always on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 20, 2010 at 4:17 AM Noel, Thank you for supporting my End Line Word contest. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop February 20, 2010 at 3:17 AM You're square with this original poem..Excellent indeed