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Love in Smoke

Fire pit is ablaze. Flame flickering, smoke billows. Your image dances.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 7/27/2013 2:59:00 PM
I enjoyed the fantastic imagery of the smoky dancing image... very well done. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:39:00 PM
I love that last line here. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/22/2013 2:37:00 PM
Dancing to the flickering flames..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:39:00 PM
This is very nice...congratulations
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
Love this Adam.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:47:00 AM
Thank you all. Its always a pleasure to be recognized. I have a wonderful muse in my wife to thank :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:39:00 AM
Adam congrats on your excellent win. Warm a smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2013 1:08:00 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality, Adam ! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:00:00 PM
Adam :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:18:00 PM
Wow, a real haiku in spirit. Bravo!
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 7/14/2013 3:00:00 PM
I'm getting better ;) Thanks.