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Love In Smoke

Fire pit is ablaze.
Flame flickering, smoke billows.
Your image dances.

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Karen Anglesey

July 27, 2013 at 2:59 PM

I enjoyed the fantastic imagery of the smoky dancing image... very well done. Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2013 at 11:39 PM

I love that last line here. BIG congrats for your win.

Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2013 at 2:37 PM

Dancing to the flickering flames..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

July 22, 2013 at 12:39 PM

This is very nice...congratulations

Kash Poet

July 22, 2013 at 11:36 AM

Love this Adam.Congrats on your win.

Adam Hapworth

July 22, 2013 at 6:47 AM

Thank you all. Its always a pleasure to be recognized. I have a wonderful muse in my wife to thank :)

Connie Gildersleeve

July 22, 2013 at 6:39 AM

Adam congrats on your excellent win. Warm a smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2013 at 1:08 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Adam ! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 21, 2013 at 8:00 PM

Adam :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA