Love, Ill Let It Wait Pt1

I rubbed my hands
Making circles on frosted windows
And the rain fell and stuck awhile
We rolled back our seats
Our breaths met but I couldn't let you have me yet
Our hands fumbled,our mouths mumbled
My toes curled in those boots
You told me a story, and I played along
But my hearts a stone and your just a till
See ill move around, but in the end I'm still whole
You try with blades now dull
Yours is the story ill tell 
It's easier for me to mend, something Iv never spun
When I don't have to fit and all you need is my wit
Squeezing in, you'll try but remember your just a till and ill see you by
In the end ill still let you go
I drew on you and let you stick, but I'm tired, and no one can have me yet
Your heart is in my net
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 13, 2010 at 9:24 PM
sweet loving write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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October 12, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Beautiful poem.really enjoyable read.I love the last line.Great write.Love,Jamecia
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October 4, 2010 at 8:26 PM
excellent write thank you my friend [duncan]
Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 1:12 PM
You heart is my net.. nice expression on love, chelsie
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October 4, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Interesting write..Sara
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October 4, 2010 at 12:01 PM
From what I am reading this afternoon it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Chelsie. Love, Carol
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