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Love I Know

love a place I know but it's obliterated I saw depth in grief
Written: September 7, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:37 PM
quite a poignant little poem here!
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:25 AM
To rip the life and soul from a person is indeed obliteration, yet supposedly grief is part of what makes us human, deep indeed Lasaad, cheers David
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 5:55 AM
So sad--emotions well evoked.
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 2:23 AM
When it happens it leaves such a void in our lives Lasaad. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 1:08 AM
sad but marvellous haiku.
Skelly Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:11 PM
Ooo, very sad Lasaad, but very nice...Delice
Hankins Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 7:55 PM
Wow, what a marvelous haiku, Lasaad. It is so sad when something (or a place) we love is obliterated for whatever reason. I loved this.
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Hi Lasaad, What a well written with much depth. Thanks for visiting my page. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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