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love a place I know but it's obliterated I saw depth in grief Written: September 7, 2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2021 3:37:00 PM

quite a poignant little poem here!

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/8/2021 9:25:00 AM

To rip the life and soul from a person is indeed obliteration, yet supposedly grief is part of what makes us human, deep indeed Lasaad, cheers David

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2021 5:55:00 AM

So sad--emotions well evoked.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2021 2:23:00 AM

When it happens it leaves such a void in our lives Lasaad. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/8/2021 1:08:00 AM

sad but marvellous haiku.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/7/2021 10:11:00 PM

Ooo, very sad Lasaad, but very nice...Delice

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/7/2021 7:55:00 PM

Wow, what a marvelous haiku, Lasaad. It is so sad when something (or a place) we love is obliterated for whatever reason. I loved this.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2021 6:41:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, What a well written with much depth. Thanks for visiting my page. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis