Love Hurts Actually

everything just blurs together
the colors fade away 
levaing only black and white
words mean so little 
i feel im falling through myself 
i can feel every break in my self
i feel so alone lost and used up
dried without a line to hang onto
i feel that heavy sinking feeling all over again
i cant even feel the right feeling to feel 
all i know is im a prisoner
and i cry for the death of my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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artlyy Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 8:06 AM
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 9:13 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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September 9, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Jai, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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