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Love Hurts

Whack went your head Sand in my eyes Scissors sliced your hair A push from behind Yellow crayons flew about Pencils snapped in two Kindergarten was not easy Brawling, me and you Your tongue stuck out I rolled my eyes My mother pleaded please Nope, not sharing pie We fought like devils Each our arch nemesis Fast forward twenty years And then, we kissed

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Date: 2/1/2025 9:49:00 PM
Kids fight then as twenty somethings kissing. For some people things like that happen. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Beau Barberis
Date: 2/2/2025 5:01:00 AM
Thanks, Miranda. Was not based on my kindergarten experience! :)
Date: 2/1/2025 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Amazing at the changes that can happen in a lifetime. Sara K
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Beau Barberis
Date: 2/2/2025 5:01:00 AM
Sometimes life is funny! Thanks for the kind words!
Date: 1/31/2025 5:13:00 AM
Very nice. Your poem is how love works most of the time anyway. Congrats
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Beau Barberis
Date: 2/2/2025 4:59:00 AM
I hope not so violently! Thanks for the comment!
Date: 1/31/2025 3:10:00 AM
- ... sweet end ... lovely poem, Beau :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Beau Barberis
Date: 1/31/2025 3:46:00 AM
So nice of you to comment! Thank you!
Date: 1/31/2025 2:06:00 AM
Cute poem, congratulations
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Beau Barberis
Date: 1/31/2025 3:45:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 1/29/2025 3:11:00 PM
"ooooooh love hurts." From the song by Nazareth. Cute poem Beau
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Beau Barberis
Date: 1/31/2025 3:44:00 AM
An oldie, but a goodie! Thanks for the comment!

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