Love Have No Limit

My love has no limit
Like the stars beyond our galaxy
I wonder why they stay mad at me?
Effortless of them, I've stayed satisfactory
But I know something they don't
I'll do something they won't
My love has no limit
And conditional is what I don't want
That goes for family
That goes for friends
That goes for my girl, until we meet our end
My love has no limit, so what's an end?
I'm saying I'll give it all as long as you don't pretend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 27, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Sweet poem too it sounds very true and honest too. Welcome to P soup, i love to read new poems too, if you want to stop by and read what i have written about a tenderness love lost. Keep up the good work your doing great. Best regards Signed Julie
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December 6, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Good message, Xavier. "I"m with you, just don't BS me...." : )
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October 22, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Marvelous poem, Xavier. I will be calling you Mr. X or simply X. An excellent debut spoken w/much truth. All the truly great poems have a crescendo ending. Yours did have that strong, memorable last line. Welcome to PSoup, friend. Ty for reading my poem, "Sister Love," and commenting. I do appreciate that. I will peruse more of your work. Holla back soon. Much love and peace to you and yours.
Johnson Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for following up Mr. Robinson. I love your work as well as you do mine. I have big plans this month for my fellow soupers to enjoy. Keep in touch and keep the good writings coming!
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September 7, 2016 at 1:25 PM
XAVIER, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 3, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Xavier,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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