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Love Has Fizz

How sweet it is when love had fizz, and life's bell was a tinkle, one time me eyes locked with a cuz, but she was way too little. ol alien, poor bugger me, richoted up into a tree, tangled with a swarm of bee's the sting of stung exciting cousin Don he caught a guy, teasing bees to get a rise, water squirted from his eyes, his phallus pronged and bulging:) Don Johnson 29-june-11

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Date: 6/29/2011 6:09:00 PM
Oooohoohoohoo! What a place to get stung. Guess he had to sit in some cold water for awhie. Really cute my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/29/2011 8:00:00 PM
Yes Judy, True story, the sting getter was Chinese and reckoned, when questioned, it would enhance sex with the wife? perhaps he had something?
Date: 6/29/2011 1:31:00 PM
I always enjoy your rhythm in poetry with a fine lingo as I do in the poems of Robert Hinslaw, Don
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:19:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Don. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 6:43:00 AM
A little too naughty for your age it seems,friend..fine
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:44:00 AM
that ol phallus seems to be giving one poet troubles in this write DON..haha.. great piece of fun and humor as well as lessdon learned ..luv.. oh..
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