Love Has Fizz

How sweet it is when love had fizz,
and life's bell was a tinkle,
one time me eyes locked with a cuz,
but she was way too little.

ol alien, poor bugger me,
richoted up into a tree,
tangled with a swarm of bee's
the sting of stung exciting

cousin Don he caught a guy,
teasing bees to get a rise,
water squirted from his eyes,
his phallus pronged and bulging:)

Don Johnson 29-june-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 29, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Oooohoohoohoo! What a place to get stung. Guess he had to sit in some cold water for awhie. Really cute my friend. God Bless, JB
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Yes Judy, True story, the sting getter was Chinese and reckoned, when questioned, it would enhance sex with the wife? perhaps he had something?
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 1:31 PM
I always enjoy your rhythm in poetry with a fine lingo as I do in the poems of Robert Hinslaw, Don
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:19 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Don. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 6:43 AM
A little too naughty for your age it seems,friend..fine
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:44 AM
that ol phallus seems to be giving one poet troubles in this write DON..haha.. great piece of fun and humor as well as lessdon learned ..luv.. oh..
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