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Love Happened

Love came by I shut my eye He professed his care But I did'nt dare To believe in thee What he felt for me Then came dusk, then came dawn Before I knew it, my heart was gone Is this the grace of the Almighty Or mere serendipity? But I was in love, in love, in love.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/21/2024 5:42:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 5:52:00 PM

sneha s, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 7:45:00 PM

sneha , a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/5/2009 8:39:00 AM

Welcome to PS, S Sneha! Good write! Thanks for sharing. Do keep writing! Peace and love, Audrey

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 12/4/2009 10:23:00 PM

This poem seems like Rhyme one thing I like to do is try different forms of poetrty for a challenge

Michael Romero

Date: 12/4/2009 3:57:00 PM

very nice write and welcome to the soup

Not Telling

Date: 12/4/2009 3:30:00 PM

Your heart got taken. It happens all too easily. Well written, i especially like the flow!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/4/2009 1:33:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Sheha. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/4/2009 8:24:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sneha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol