Love Gone Sour

Love Gone Sour

“You lied!”
She cried.
He sighed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Poetry in just 6 words Gerard! Great Job! Congratulations! :) _HANS
Kimathi Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Beautiful, splendid..... Congrats Gerard, for your top placement, and well, deserved WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Well done.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with your wit Gerard.
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your win! Clever.
A   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 5:07 PM
WOW, that's like saying, enough said... Gerard, Congrats on your "SIX WORD win." LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:55 PM
cute that you rhymed the words! Long time, no see!
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:45 PM
so few words say so much - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:48 AM
The lives of many men captured in these six words! Nice write Gerard, congratulations on your placement.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Sam.
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