Raquel P Poet I do not know?

Love Garden

If love was a garden you may consider me a flower

But after the first shower

You will see that I am no more than a humble weed

A parasite attached to the first seed

And I will drain you dry

And before you die 

I will betray you

And all you can say is 

I should have known

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Jack Horne April 30, 2011 at 6:57 AM People forgive and forget : ) Very powerful poem

Stephan McBride April 2, 2011 at 5:03 AM great way of showing how you feel, great write

Manouchka Doreus April 1, 2011 at 6:48 AM i wasn't expecting that at all.. lol but it's pretty good

Lynette Chachere May 8, 2010 at 11:07 PM kind of dark, but honest, and the truth is all that is needed. great write. i hope to read more of your upcoming writes. -Always&Forever LYnette

Carol Sunshine Brown May 3, 2010 at 4:53 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Raquel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta May 1, 2010 at 5:37 PM Wonderful thoughts well penned

Kim Hilliker May 1, 2010 at 5:03 PM Wow! Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.