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Love Garden

If love was a garden you may consider me a flower But after the first shower You will see that I am no more than a humble weed A parasite attached to the first seed And I will drain you dry And before you die I will betray you And all you can say is I should have known

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/30/2011 6:57:00 AM
People forgive and forget : ) Very powerful poem
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:03:00 AM
great way of showing how you feel, great write
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:48:00 AM
i wasn't expecting that at all.. lol but it's pretty good
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Date: 5/8/2010 11:07:00 PM
kind of dark, but honest, and the truth is all that is needed. great write. i hope to read more of your upcoming writes. -Always&Forever LYnette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:53:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Raquel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful thoughts well penned
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:03:00 PM
Wow! Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.
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