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Love From Begining To End

dreaming messmerized hypnotised
idealized illusions.
imagination illumination sophistication
idealistic determination.
sadistic seduction illogical distruction.
delusion seclusions confusions intrusion.
insignificant insecure isolations instigations.
deceptive demeanor defective delight
fury rage scorned fight

Copyright © John Loving Iii | Year Posted 2012

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Diane Christian Date: 6/14/2012 1:29:00 AM aww that is verry wel written, and thanks for your kind comments on my devine fotle, yes people ned to know god is our friend and he calls us as his own, God bles from diane Login to Reply

Justcallme Britt Date: 6/3/2012 10:48:00 PM this is what most people's love seems like to me! lol <3 Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 5/29/2012 5:47:00 PM Wow! a great assortment of words that go from positive to negative and end up at the bottom. So neat John, Love the way you formed this and it must have been a bit of work to think it through! Luv, Lizzie Login to Reply

Saniya Galeyeva Date: 5/22/2012 4:30:00 PM And indifference after all that... Love is such a mess sometimes. A very dynamic and capacious image of love. An excellent work! Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 5/22/2012 7:56:00 AM Wow...you summed up volatile love. Excellent write! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/21/2012 3:10:00 PM Complete turn around in this love..This one could be one of those where start with one word and it changes from one thing to another like start with love then ends with hate...I will have to look that form up and come back and tell you what it is...Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for the reassurance that my work will make a good entry..Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/21/2012 3:11:00 PM John, The form is diamante...Sara

Diane Christian Date: 5/21/2012 2:47:00 PM wow thats good and thanks John for your feed back on my poem why i like to smile. Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 5/18/2012 10:58:00 PM wow great descriptions! keeps a body guessing, :) Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 5/18/2012 3:02:00 PM I do like happy endings Login to Reply Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 5/18/2012 3:03:00 PM I can see I have a lot of catching up to do, you have been busy in my absence :-)

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 5/7/2012 1:34:00 PM Amazing assorment of words John and every one spelled right! :) I love the way this draws me in with all the emotion you express so well. Login to Reply Elizabeth Wesley Date: 5/7/2012 1:35:00 PM assortment is what I meant to say; we can't all be perfect - haha

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/4/2012 3:41:00 PM Dear John, happy belated birthday! I'm so sorrry I missed it earlier. Thanks for stopping by my work. Love and blessings always, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/26/2012 4:02:00 PM Wow! Talk about bad experiences with love. Guess we've all had some bad luck in love, but I find this poem captivating. The dreams represent our hopes and imagination is what it took for you to write this gem, John. Happy Birthday, my friend. I wish we could stay in touch more. Love you, Carolyn Login to Reply John Loving Iii Date: 4/26/2012 5:01:00 PM i don't know you were a "missing person" for a while John Loving Iii Date: 4/26/2012 4:56:00 PM all you got to do is call.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/25/2012 9:56:00 PM John, i love the way it all ends... wow... love it... truly... this dazzled me ... maybe cause this is true and lives up to most realities... enjoyed..pd Login to Reply John Loving Iii Date: 4/26/2012 3:21:00 PM the truth hurts

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/25/2012 3:40:00 PM yes, black is sleep, but for me, green or blue would be peace. Black is also evil and deep depression. Just like blue has the bad connotation of the "blue's" but also it's the sky and sea of nature! I notice you put "i don't know" for t his one. It reminds me of that one type of poetry I think called Tetracyts" or something like that. YOu could mold it into that form, John. Login to Reply Ms.Erica Jackson Date: 5/13/2012 1:55:00 AM Not all black is.."depression"....some black signature "gorgeous."