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Love For Nature

Tender as cuddling arms, this godly place Bright the jasmines that pose in laced dresses Enchanting my soul with bliss all around; That paints this unbridled colorfulness. No panels of steel gates here, or mown grass That disapprove of a fancy free tread… Where I graze the meadow, in abandon Relishing the scent of air overhead. Oh jasmine sprigs are fondled by the breeze Where birdsong trills on moonlit summer skies; That kindles inner holiness in me As lush artworks enthuse these joy-filled eyes Even in winter’s hand, buds glint the dew That’s why I love nature staying aglow, As any cycle thrills my thankful heart … To pray for her dear life… to richly flow. ````````````````` Posted 6/05/2016 Contest of Rob Carmack, Srewed lX

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Date: 10/6/2016 7:47:00 AM
Wow, I see why this poem won the contest Nette. This poem was laid out very nicely. Eloquent...your rhymes were beautiful. Lovely imageries created by your words! MC
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Date: 6/6/2016 10:43:00 PM
This is so lovely Nette! This would have been much higher on my list. So glad I got to read this beauty. Summer is the scent of magical jasmine at twilight into morning light. My husband has planted a bush back and front of our yard and it is what I love most about summer. Congratulations Nette. ; )
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:42:00 PM
Nette, back with my congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/6/2016 12:17:00 AM
There seems to be a big veneration on nature and I guess everyone does it. Lovely write, my dear, as always.
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:34:00 PM
Nette, just beautiful..a winner to me, good luck dear lady :)-luloo
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Date: 6/5/2016 6:41:00 PM
Your poems often lead me to trails free of modern adulteration, wildernesses of natural poetic play Poetess..."Where I gaze the meadow, in abandon..." superb! J.A.B.
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Date: 6/5/2016 5:59:00 PM
The lush richness of nature has a more heavenly feel than the clean clipped lawns and hedges with precise edges..good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/5/2016 3:55:00 PM
Love the images of the jasmine nette. I glance out my window and see the leaves rustling in the breeze and can't see how anyone could not love nature.
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Date: 6/5/2016 2:21:00 PM
Your magnificent poetry brings me joy. I love the glory of mother earth!
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Date: 6/5/2016 1:28:00 PM
The environ is one place that soothes the soul. A most brilliant poem from you!
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:50:00 AM
nette this is so beautiful from start to finish this flowed like honey.
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