Newton Ranaweera Poet Haiku

Love Flies

she writes, deletes, writes 
he skims and scans rainbow lines 
love flies with blue plumes


*3rd Place* in the following Premiere Contest (judged on Dec. 23, 2020) 

Dec 21, 2020
Hi-Ku(3) Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2020 at 6:57 PM beautiful. Congrats on the awesome win Newton Ranaweera December 28, 2020 at 1:35 PM Thank you so much for the congrats, Andrea!!

Mystic Rose Rose December 23, 2020 at 12:43 PM I don't know why but this makes me smile, I hope you caught all the rainbow shades of this beautiful feather dear poet. congrats and Merry Christmas Newton Ranaweera December 23, 2020 at 1:47 PM Thank you so much, Mystic Rose Rose, for this impressively sweet comment, congrats and the Christmas wishes!! Wish you Happy Christmas and holidays!!

Gershon Wolf December 23, 2020 at 7:56 AM Wow! Congrats, Newton, on your big win in Braian's contest. Season's Joy, Gershon Newton Ranaweera December 23, 2020 at 10:09 AM Thank you so much, Gershon, for impressively great complement and the seasonal greetings!! Wish you Happy Christmas and holidays!!