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Love Flies

she writes, deletes, writes 
he skims and scans rainbow lines 
love flies with blue plumes


*3rd Place* in the following Premiere Contest (judged on Dec. 23, 2020) 

Dec 21, 2020
Hi-Ku(3) Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2020 6:57:00 PM

beautiful. Congrats on the awesome win

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/28/2020 1:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congrats, Andrea!!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/23/2020 12:43:00 PM

I don't know why but this makes me smile, I hope you caught all the rainbow shades of this beautiful feather dear poet. congrats and Merry Christmas

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/23/2020 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mystic Rose Rose, for this impressively sweet comment, congrats and the Christmas wishes!! Wish you Happy Christmas and holidays!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/23/2020 7:56:00 AM

Wow! Congrats, Newton, on your big win in Braian's contest. Season's Joy, Gershon

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/23/2020 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for impressively great complement and the seasonal greetings!! Wish you Happy Christmas and holidays!!