Love Flew Out the Window - Revised

Love flew out the window, the wind took it away
Hoping you would catch glance, but you did not look its way

There are no beats filling my heart, our love is now untwined
Like a captain abandoning ship, I will leave it all behind

Ears not needed for listening, there is nothing to converse
Two people branded by papers that are difficult to reverse

Feeling like a punished child, I am done giving reasons
Winter, Spring, Summer, Fall...I just need a change of seasons.

©Holly P. Moore
   November 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 1:16 AM
Holly well done much much better...David
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November 21, 2012 at 11:34 AM
ha, just sent you another soup mail as you sent one to me.....David
Williams Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:32 AM
soup mail soon....David
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November 21, 2012 at 9:18 AM
I like this Holly and you are doing well with new forms keep going girl xx
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