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Love, feelings,emotions and marriage

Love is beautiful, it brings perfection Perfection sprouting from two human beings Two human beings who then transcend mutually Transcend mutually until they become unique Feelings can be deadly wild like a stallion Like a stallion who is exploding all rings All rings in a precise way, very vigorously Vigorously until the hearts are in total panic Emotions act faster than every single action Every single action, including automated flings Automated flings killing the fool anonymously Anonymously crushing his own harmony, pathetic Marriage is complex, surrounded by temptation Temptation which amplifies with useless mournings Useless mournings opening doors, a new life adjacently Adjacently creating a world that is tremendously chaotic

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Date: 1/5/2016 12:48:00 AM
awesome
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:54:00 AM
your poetry is awesome D.M.,,, and the temtation... is what you describe... every feeling and emotion over take.. us in every way... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/21/2011 6:28:00 AM
Desiree if we would think about the unhappyness of straying ,most would reconsider. Inspired poem .Anne
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:41:00 AM
really very beautifully written.....
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Date: 4/29/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my poem, greatly appreciated. I enjoy reading your poems.
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:57:00 PM
Superbly awesome Desiree.. u have hit the nail on the head on all phases of luv and marriage luv..going to make this one a new fav for future use... appreciate the great comment on my entry for Nette's contest ... the 70's were awesome as your words ..
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:46:00 PM
Wow Desiree deep and very soulful , my mind is going all over the place trying to sense were this one came from. So poetic ,kudos my friend. Anne
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:55:00 AM
How true that one act of infidelity can crush a marriage completely, Desiree. Temptation is always out there, but I seem to have grown past the desire to pursue it. I'd give anything for just one devoted mate. Love your poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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