Love, Feelings,Emotions and Marriage

Love is beautiful, it brings perfection
Perfection sprouting from two human beings
Two human beings who then transcend mutually
Transcend mutually until they become unique

Feelings can be deadly wild like a stallion
Like a stallion who is exploding all rings
All rings in a precise way, very vigorously
Vigorously until the hearts are in total panic

Emotions act faster than every single action
Every single action, including automated flings
Automated flings killing the fool anonymously
Anonymously crushing his own harmony, pathetic

Marriage is complex, surrounded by temptation
Temptation which amplifies with useless mournings
Useless mournings opening doors, a new life adjacently
Adjacently creating a world that is tremendously chaotic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/5/2016 12:48:00 AM
awesome
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:54:00 AM
your poetry is awesome D.M.,,, and the temtation... is what you describe... every feeling and emotion over take.. us in every way... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/21/2011 6:28:00 AM
Desiree if we would think about the unhappyness of straying ,most would reconsider. Inspired poem .Anne
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:41:00 AM
really very beautifully written.....
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Date: 4/29/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my poem, greatly appreciated. I enjoy reading your poems.
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:57:00 PM
Superbly awesome Desiree.. u have hit the nail on the head on all phases of luv and marriage luv..going to make this one a new fav for future use... appreciate the great comment on my entry for Nette's contest ... the 70's were awesome as your words ..
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:46:00 PM
Wow Desiree deep and very soulful , my mind is going all over the place trying to sense were this one came from. So poetic ,kudos my friend. Anne
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:55:00 AM
How true that one act of infidelity can crush a marriage completely, Desiree. Temptation is always out there, but I seem to have grown past the desire to pursue it. I'd give anything for just one devoted mate. Love your poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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