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Love Exclamation Oh Please

“Oh Romeo”, “yes, my sweet Juliet” This love I believe, Is nothing but fiction, nothing but a dream. Pray show me a love Untainted by pain That time’s wretched hands haven’t touched And filled with lies, adultery and pure hate Love sick mates Sweet nothings and French kisses on the streets So sickly in love. So obliviously insane How long does it last, how long will love stay I’ll tell you how long, till love dreams some other dream, Of enthralling beauty and a new found craze. Then comes so dramatically Cursing and hating Accompanied so innocently with kicking and screaming. Such music to thy ears, such music do thou loved ones speak Suddenly “it’s gone, no spark do I feel “ And in this do tell me does love just run away. Weak, I say, is how love leaves you. Weak and distraught, and with nothing left but pain And the reason we find Such a thing may die Is not but long legs or a wickedly pleasing smile Like hunters they prowl The crowd for their next score To boast of wildly among all their friends Who deep inside they all know are their foes So fall deeply in love But a warning beware Of liars and lovers Who cannot help but stare For time it seems is a sinister being It walks in all happy And leaves you bloody,kicking and screaming. BY Amanda.M.Miller

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/27/2011 8:19:00 AM
* “Smile * All In All I Loved The Beautiful Voice I Found Throughout This Well Written * Worded * Reflectively Wonderful Poe * Dear Beautiful Amanda. * Yet * If Ever One Allows Another This Much Negative Power Over Their Own Happiness Then * They Hold My Compassion. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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Amanda Miller
Date: 5/28/2011 1:44:00 AM
the magic is in being in love and still being able to see things like this.i've seen both sides of love. its beautiful and well very destructive too. but it doesnt make me skeptical. i am still open to that idea.with a little window period ofcourse. either way thank you. your words definately struck a chord.. thank you for your exceptionally lovelly words sweet sarah.

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