Love Crush

I begin with an 'Hi there'
Expensive they say is your heart
Nobody's worth on your part
Stingy of the feeling of ardor
A heart's passion to adore

I have got an idea
You seek a love void of pain
A pride of beauty obtain
No love without it's heat
For without it, it's incomplete

Should I hide here?
The wilderness of my soul
Where reared the hate owl
Pray I, that your heart accept
My earnest intention attempt

The day I 'll dare
To say 'Hi dear'.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 11:11 AM
Neat progression from life to love in 17 talent filled lines... Congrats on a fine entry... Jake
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June 29, 2013 at 3:50 PM
Goodness, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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March 19, 2013 at 8:38 AM
- Sweet love poem,G.L.!!!!! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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