Love Coma
water streaming over rocks
then down over your body
tan from days in tropical sun
stretched out lazy naked on ancient
ceremony rocks
fish ponds
lazy waves across the way find the beach
and beckon
but I am enjoying too much
this rare site of naked relaxation
feasting my eyes on your beautiful
body
even better that you have relaxed into
a fine state of love coma
head back
eyes closed
water streaming
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