Heidi Sands Poet Villanelle

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Love Carry Me

Love carry me through life gently
Carry me to the mountainside
Show me the colorful sights to see

Love carry me where smiles aren’t shy
Safe places to have fun and hide
Love carry me through life gently

Love carry me to the open plains so free
To remember all we have tried
Show me the colorful sights to see

Love carry me to the rivers that be
Words in motion moving outside
Love carry me through life gently

Love carry me to the tops of trees
Once climbed, face new challenges to be tried
Show me the colorful sights to see

Love carry me far from hatred to flee
Where kindness and respect resides
Love carry me through life gently
Show me the colorful sights to see

Heidi Sands

11/8/17

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John Gondolf November 8, 2017 at 7:25 AM Heidi, I really enjoyed your poem this morning, what a great way to start my day. John Heidi Sands November 8, 2017 at 7:29 AM Thank you John! I am happy to hear you enjoyed this to start the day :)

Joanna Daniel November 8, 2017 at 6:56 AM So beautiful, Heidi, you surely have carried me away with this lovely poem:) Heidi Sands November 8, 2017 at 6:59 AM Thank you Jo ! I appreciate your comment :)

Arturo Michael November 8, 2017 at 6:04 AM As you've spoken-Let it be done...Enjoyed your poem this morning...A good day to you, Heidi Heidi Sands November 8, 2017 at 6:09 AM Thank you so much Arturo. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit November 8, 2017 at 5:53 AM Among the best, Heidi--such a lovely poem to start the day--soft and caring, a beauty all around! Heidi Sands November 8, 2017 at 6:09 AM Thank you Vijay! I am happy to hear that. Have a great day :)

Russell Sivey November 8, 2017 at 5:44 AM This is soooo beautiful, a very well written Villanelle! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem of love and hope this morning! You have written such a magnificent poem that I'm in awe of its powerful words upon me! What a grand piece, Great Work!! Heidi Sands November 8, 2017 at 5:47 AM Thank you so much Russell. I changed one word through it. Softly to gently. Hopefully it is still as you found it to be. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day! :)