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Love Came

Love came and went- lovers hummed bitter-sweet symphonies my ears full of buzz, eyes full of tears, ............................................................................ suddenly, I hear cuckoo singing me melodies- singing of rain; monsoon and drain- of green hills, valleys and plains, of seasons that go and come again, deserts turning oasis, no barren they remain- of light and love that I started seeing in this maiden. ............................................................................

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Date: 4/28/2014 3:42:00 AM
woow that is awesome
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/2/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thank you agnes :D- I for whole year could not know how to reply to comments so this late...much thanks :D
Date: 4/28/2014 12:56:00 AM
If It's Love I'm There. Welcome To Her Heart's PoetrySoup. Nice Verse Pushpa; Keep Brushing...Love, Jeremy *
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/2/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Jeremy...much love from Nepal
Date: 4/28/2014 12:05:00 AM
That was awesome! Beautiful poem, short and sweet. I loved how each word really rings with a cleverly selected sound. Great word choice, keep it up!
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/2/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Charlie!! :D

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