Samiha Zubair Poet Rhyme

Love Bug

When everything starts going awry
No qualms in acceding to a special mortal, no matter how grouchy

All gospels on controlling sentiments go down the drain
Blessed and cursed simultaneously like an ounce of hydration in a desert of sand

Seemingly the only logical thing
Belies all the comments on being just a fling

No matter how much bereavement it brings
It is the least ransom one can afford in love from which sightseers cringe

Getting enraptured by it
Even on loosing precious moments one feels most fit

Hope sapped by the fact
As it doesn't seem right

Still unable to curb 
Though one tries with might

Only consolation in prenominal testament
That the chosen one is in sight

Prays for divergence from feeling atrabilious
And to channelise energy for what is more precious

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Faraz Ajmal June 18, 2017 at 3:14 PM A very beautiful written poem, I ve read your other poems also and also commented on one is past, you do have excellent talent for poetey, your every poem is brilliant and more beautiful than the other however as said before i will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Faraz Ajmal June 18, 2017 at 3:14 PM A very beautiful written poem, I ve read your other poems also and also commented on one is past, you do have excellent talent for poetey, your every poem is brilliant and more beautiful than the other however as said before i will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Skat A November 24, 2015 at 4:51 PM A great way in describing love in a buggy way. Love the way you held logic your own personal way. A sweet 7 poem. SKAT Samiha Zubair November 24, 2015 at 5:12 PM Even the love in the form you see it might not be your companion still some part, the experiences, the feelings maybe just the touch will leave you somehow changed. Just like a bug.

Darlene Gifford August 24, 2015 at 12:19 PM I liked your love bug poem. Your feelings are well expressed here. And thanks for stopping by to read one of my poems. Welcome to poetry soup and we're here to be your poetry friend and help you with any questions you might have. Blessings, ~~~Darlene Samiha Zubair August 24, 2015 at 1:01 PM I am happy you liked it

Emile Pinet August 10, 2015 at 8:23 AM This is a beautiful poem, laid out well and described with feelings written from the heart. Emile. Samiha Zubair August 10, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thankyou. Sometimes when you think you are at your lowest ebb, creativity seems to have more substance

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2015 at 6:33 PM Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Samiha Zubair August 9, 2015 at 11:20 PM I feel that love in any form, no matter how old fashioned it seems, is like an addiction. Please read through my other poems if u wish and i would like to know what you think of them