Love Bomb

I will soon drop a bomb into your lovers hideaway
You will feel my passion exploding within your very soul
His defenses will never separate you from my love


First attempt at a Sijo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Very drastic move on your part..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
Gasun Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 1:42 AM
Wow! Love this great Sijo! Congratulations on your fantastic win my dear poet friend Richard! love/hugs,Leonora
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Richard...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on another win! Well deserved. Always, Annalise
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:02 PM
WHOA!! How did I ever miss this one!! BIG congrats on this. It's explosive!
Ellison Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Wish I had written that! Cheers!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Jack.
Widjanarko Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 11:40 PM
Yeap even better :D I really enjoyed it for twice :D
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Thanks Yanny!
Widjanarko Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Soupmail
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:40 PM
On my way.
Grindele Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 8:16 PM
I really enjoyed this short poem.(: Good work and I will definitely read more later.((:
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:40 PM
Thanks!
Widjanarko Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Great sijo Richard :D and strong love bombs :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Yanny, not sure if I have done this form correctly.
Horne Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:47 PM
love this powrrful sijo, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Thanks Jack
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Very lovely and well done Richard! love,Deb
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Thanks Deb, I appreciate the visit and always happy for some love.
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Richard great first attempt....David
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Thanks David.
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