Love Bites

A piece of decadent chocolate,
delicately wrap loyalty;
A gift box of golden foil 
makes anyone light up;
Melting on your lips 
you take it in;
Savoring 
true love’s
bite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 3:47 PM
Hello Melani, yes that is true about the chocolates.\Yum! i am making some for Valentine's Day. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Hello Melan, you are welcome.. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Udaeta Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much.
Rodgers Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 2:33 PM
Hello Melani, i could almost taste the chocolate because it was so well written. Blessings, Daniel
Udaeta Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much. I appreciate that!
Scott Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Any poem with chocolate in it is a sure winner for me! :)
Udaeta Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:16 PM
I agree. Thank you
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