Love Be Not Proud

Beneath this insane feeling of rejection- i still love u/
Beyond these walls of my crazy imagination- i still search for u/
Letting u go was da worst decision of my life/
I don wanna accept da fact dat u no longer in my life/
Day and nite i dwell in yr world/
I know this aint rite but what am i to do when u no longer exist in my life/
Time is at stand still over here/
Wish i could see whats going on over there/
Many said i wont cope wifout u and they were rite/
So it.s clear i'm dead because of u- my days are nites/
Even a blind man can see my pain/
As wel as a numb person can feel my pain/
Cupid was shootin me wif yr arrows so my blood was red and white/
Now i hate dat day were everythin around is just red and white/
Don blame me coz i tried and GOD knows i tried/
This not bout me tryin to gain pity/
But it.s bout realising that i was wrong/
Voices whispered dat it was too late/
But what kind of a men will i be if i don settle this score/
Come back to me so there wont be nothin to lose but so much to gain/
You are not dead to me so give me back my sunny days and take away this rain/
You are da reason for me to be alive/
You are da gift from da heavens above/
Wish i could puzzle up my broken for u to home/
So in the meantime u can house the home in my soul/
U are mighty to me and i thank da Almighty indeed/
U are still mistery to me although i've been wif u in need/
I still see u in da eyes of loved ones/
I still defend u in da haters mind/
I dreamt a dream bout u in my dreams/
I still hear yr voice in da melodies/
I still feel yr peace in all da harmony/
I broke my compass but it still leads me to yr direction/
I'm broke ngaphakathi and u da last piece to my completion/
Il rather die than live wifout u coz dat be nothin/
Give me this moment so i can cherish every second wif something/
I wont apologies coz i already did/
I wont continue diggin this grave coz i'm into deep/
I walked thousand miles for u,feet hurting/
I knelt everyday praying, clothes torned/
Yet GOD gave me grew skies so yrs can be blue/
Took u away from my life so u can grace another life/
I blamed u for every lil thing in my life/
Hate is a diseases but u are da cure/
Yet i still say u did this to me so LOVE BE NOT PROUD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/3/2025 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/19/2016 7:17:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE ONCE AGAIN
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Date: 1/26/2014 10:51:00 PM
Taisco, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/3/2014 12:28:00 AM
Tanks for the welcome, im frm south africa, soldier by work
Date: 1/26/2014 11:30:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Taisco - I choose your first written poem - Nice - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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