Love Bathing...

Gently walking,
sweetly talking;
filling void of heart
and every part
of me whilst we enjoy,
long hours of love do we employ.
This strongest emotion in my breast,
such powerful heart beats most impressed.
I lay my head, you stroke my hair,
sing tuneful notes and soothe my care.
For hours have passed we did not measure,
instead we sun soaked primal pleasure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lanier Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Great poem...I love this description of an intimate moment in time. Great rhyme...I'm glad I stopped to read it.
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Good Rhyme. Sara
Mason Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Oh my, the last line here is breathtaking!! Great job Anna-Marie ... if I haven't already said it Welcome to PoetrySoup (and if I have well you get the welcome twice ... smile). I've enjoyed reading your writes and will come back to read more soon !
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Anna-Marie, This poem has such a peaceful, soothing, rythmic flow. Perfect for Love Bathing. Beautiful! Lovingly, Dane
Rhinem Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:24 PM
....The walking~The talking~The fillng of "Your Precious Heart~The powerful emotions of perhaps love, which plays this lovely melody which stirs "Your Priceless Soul"~The tenderness of warmths touch, enhanced by one which "You" sound to admire somewhat deeply...."Very Beautiful Anna Marie~Absolutely So!!!":):)~"My Love always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!":):)~Lets go view another of "Your Wonderful Writes Dear Lady!!!"~....
Rhinem Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:18 PM
Smile~What An Absolutely Beautiful Write Dear Lady~So Tender, Loving & Warm!!!":):)~"Hello Precious & Gifted Anna Marie!!!":))~I truly hope that life has een treating "You" very wonderfully dear!!?~I got "Your" email; but I accidently erased it, so I could not get back to "You"~Please, send it to me again~For I truly would love to speak with "You!!!":):)~I am sorry that I have been away: but I sincerely love this romantic poem of "Yours" here~I could envision the loveliness of it all!!!:):)...
Anderson Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 5:12 AM
a beautiful lullabye....for big boys.lol.
Strand Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Beautiful song of love Anna-Marie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Winter Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 12:34 PM
The beauty here gave me goosebumps. This is one special love where time and the world disappear and there is only you two and your private world to explore, enjoy, seek refuge, and all those good things. Deeply tender. Beautifully written. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Peranteau Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Well Anna,...seeing that I am in the plumbing and carpentry buisness,..I could quickly take that instead of measuring pipe or some treated wood,..you and your co-worker hit the beach and caught some lovie dovie,...I mean some rays ! *smiles* Great write Anna, I loved it ! * "We did not measure" james
Burton Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 8:41 AM
well written.... will read more of your work. have a great day.
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