Love At First Sight

Unplanned, undone, it came, and went,
Two hearts now yearned to chase the scent,
A glance, a stare, so short, but sweet,
Hope I'll be there when those eyes meet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 9, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Andrew Gomolka, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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December 20, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Andrew, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and you're poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: you're new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 20, 2014 at 8:13 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Very nice pen Andrew! lol.. I really enjoyed your poem dear friend. A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas! have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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