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Love At First Sight

Unplanned, undone, it came, and went, Two hearts now yearned to chase the scent, A glance, a stare, so short, but sweet, Hope I'll be there when those eyes meet.

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Date: 6/9/2016 11:17:00 PM
Andrew Gomolka, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:15:00 PM
Andrew, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and you're poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: you're new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:13:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:03:00 PM
Very nice pen Andrew! lol.. I really enjoyed your poem dear friend. A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas! have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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