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Love At First Sight

Like ships in the night It was love at first sight A sudden glance Two beacons burning bright Turning blackness into light They began to dance Ending the constant fight These two lovers make it right Ending in romance FOR Balassi Stanza Contest

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Molebogeng Lenoge

Date: 4/20/2014 9:35:00 AM

*love it* really well wrttn en lovely en I like the way you end it..*great stuff*

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/18/2013 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations Richard!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/18/2013 9:48:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/15/2013 3:49:00 PM

Quite a unique formst here Richsrd, all congrats Joe..)

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/15/2013 12:31:00 PM

Hello Richard, This is a beautifully written poem. Congrats on your win....Roger

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2013 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations richard xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2013 7:48:00 PM

Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2013 5:34:00 PM

oh dear, you are being a little rebel again. I would accept this one as Balassi if you had done the syllable count right. Anyway, you got the rhyme scheme very well, my friend. Let me know if you want me to help you with this one. (I see you were asking Dr. Ram if you had it right down here)

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/2/2013 10:59:00 PM

Well at least I got half of it right

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/1/2013 8:26:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, richard

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/1/2013 8:30:00 PM

Hope I got the Balassi Stanza right

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2013 3:18:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Richard - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/1/2013 3:27:00 PM

Nice to hear from you Anne