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Love At First Sight

Like ships in the night      It was love at first sight       A sudden glance      Two beacons burning bright      Turning blackness into light      They began to dance      Ending the constant fight       These two lovers make it right      Ending in romance                                 FOR      Balassi Stanza Contest

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Molebogeng Lenoge Date: 4/20/2014 9:35:00 AM *love it* really well wrttn en lovely en I like the way you end it..*great stuff* Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/18/2013 9:38:00 PM Congratulations Richard! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/18/2013 9:48:00 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 12/15/2013 3:49:00 PM Quite a unique formst here Richsrd, all congrats Joe..) Login to Reply

Roger Horsch Date: 12/15/2013 12:31:00 PM Hello Richard, This is a beautifully written poem. Congrats on your win....Roger Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/15/2013 8:30:00 AM Congratulations richard xx Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/14/2013 7:48:00 PM Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, richard Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/2/2013 5:34:00 PM oh dear, you are being a little rebel again. I would accept this one as Balassi if you had done the syllable count right. Anyway, you got the rhyme scheme very well, my friend. Let me know if you want me to help you with this one. (I see you were asking Dr. Ram if you had it right down here) Login to Reply Richard Ferry Date: 12/2/2013 10:59:00 PM Well at least I got half of it right

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/1/2013 8:26:00 PM Thanks for the entry, richard Login to Reply Richard Ferry Date: 12/1/2013 8:30:00 PM Hope I got the Balassi Stanza right

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2013 3:18:00 PM - A lovely poem, Richard - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Richard Ferry Date: 12/1/2013 3:27:00 PM Nice to hear from you Anne