Richard Ferry Poet Rhyme

Love At First Sight

Like ships in the night      It was love at first sight       A sudden glance      Two beacons burning bright      Turning blackness into light      They began to dance      Ending the constant fight       These two lovers make it right      Ending in romance                                 FOR      Balassi Stanza Contest

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Molebogeng Lenoge April 20, 2014 at 9:35 AM *love it* really well wrttn en lovely en I like the way you end it..*great stuff*

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 18, 2013 at 9:38 PM Congratulations Richard!

Sara Kendrick December 18, 2013 at 9:48 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joe Maverick December 15, 2013 at 3:49 PM Quite a unique formst here Richsrd, all congrats Joe..)

Roger Horsch December 15, 2013 at 12:31 PM Hello Richard, This is a beautifully written poem. Congrats on your win....Roger

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 15, 2013 at 8:30 AM Congratulations richard xx

Dr.Ram Mehta December 14, 2013 at 7:48 PM Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, richard

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2013 at 5:34 PM oh dear, you are being a little rebel again. I would accept this one as Balassi if you had done the syllable count right. Anyway, you got the rhyme scheme very well, my friend. Let me know if you want me to help you with this one. (I see you were asking Dr. Ram if you had it right down here) Richard Ferry December 2, 2013 at 10:59 PM Well at least I got half of it right

Dr.Ram Mehta December 1, 2013 at 8:26 PM Thanks for the entry, richard Richard Ferry December 1, 2013 at 8:30 PM Hope I got the Balassi Stanza right

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2013 at 3:18 PM - A lovely poem, Richard - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Ferry December 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM Nice to hear from you Anne