Love At First Sight

Your eyes bore into mine,
Set them on fire,
And now I'm blind.

Your soul hit first light,
It cast away shadows of the night.

Hands touch,
Exchanging smiles,
We smutch the rope
On the candle recoil.

Melting heart blaze
Going to and fro in haze.

Our world ignite,
Crackling sounds service,
and I cannot be more amazed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 7:20 AM
A love story you give us Qui so heartfelt. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 6:42 AM
You have expressed your passionate thoughts of love with good images, Qui
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