L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Love At First Sight

Her blue eyes sparkled when she looked at me
She licked her lips and nodded her head, invitingly,
From that moment I was a true believer, you see,
Her blue eyes sparkled when she looked at me,
I knew in that moment our love was meant to be
That love at first sight is more than a possibility.
Her blue eyes sparkled when she looked at me
She licked her lips and nodded her head, invitingly.

written September 24, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2021 at 9:44 PM Gorgeous triolet my friend. L Milton Hankins September 28, 2021 at 8:23 AM Thanks, Caren.

Paghunda Zahid September 25, 2021 at 10:51 AM That's lovely... You penned it so well... Good luck L Milton Hankins September 25, 2021 at 10:51 AM Thank you so much. How sweet of you to read and comment on my poem. I really appreciate it.

CayCay Godwin September 25, 2021 at 3:52 AM Aren't Triolets fun to write? I believe I wrote one for My Tim some moons back. You are either still in love, recently fell in love or (c) both are true. Your poem is lovely, romantic and feels like genuine emotion. I enjoyed your Triolet ... CayCay L Milton Hankins September 25, 2021 at 9:58 AM Thank you so much. My wife Deborah died almost three years ago, but I believe we were a case of love at first sight and we were together for 35 years. I miss her.