Love At First Sight

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I met her at the lighthouse,
It was all love at first sight
A picture of great beauty
A memory of a sprite.

      Each day I'm madly in love.
      Each day I yearn much for you
     Am I mostly sane or mad?
      I cannot do without you.

We toured the place together
I held her hands lest she falls,
We peered out towards the sea,
Saw her pull tight her soft shawl.

Outside we found a quaint shop
And drank a hot cup of tea
We talked about sweet nothings,
Admired the great foaming sea.

      Each day I'm madly in love,
      Each day I yearn much for you
     Am I mostly sane or mad?
      I cannot do without you.


The evening birds sang our song,
The breeze rustled through the trees.
We planned to meet the next day
Lord, how greatly I said “Please”.

Our love was not always smooth
But with reason always won
I proposed, and we married,
Gave me a gift of a son.

So life went on together,
Sadness and joy intermixed,
Life could not be happier
As all our problems we fixed.

      Each day I'm madly in love,
      Each day I yearn much for you
     Am I mostly sane or mad?
      I cannot do without you.

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Date: 7/15/2021 6:55:00 PM
Wow, they really had a wonderful time together; beautiful lines Victor that tell of these two people well.
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Date: 7/12/2021 6:41:00 AM
These lyrics do a great job of telling a romantic story.
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:15:00 PM
Lovely write, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/10/2021 5:53:00 AM
This is a lovely romantic write. So very nice, I did enjoy it...Delice
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:33:00 PM
This happy recounting of a great love affair, with marriage, wonderful memories and a child-it makes a song worth singing! Great writing, Victor. :=)
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Date: 7/9/2021 3:20:00 PM
This is a wonderful love song, Victor. Charming and sweet. May love like this go on and on and on
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Date: 7/9/2021 1:19:00 PM
- A beautiful love song, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/9/2021 10:46:00 AM
WoW! Victor, These are my kind of lyrics because I'm a hopeless romantic. I loved the happy ending. Well done. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:08:00 AM
A beautiful lyric! Love it!
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Date: 7/9/2021 6:44:00 AM
I like your lyrical romantic work. I am sure that the one you love did enjoy it. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2021 5:43:00 AM
You just know when she's the one, she's always on your mind. Tom
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:43:00 AM
Enjoyed these verses of love and romance, Victor. You paint a loving tale of life. Keep singing!
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:32:00 AM
With romance and ocean and poetry like this, a girls heart is in good hands, much love your tender side dear Victor, keep well, keep penning, you make the light house of love go on. !
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Date: 7/9/2021 1:18:00 AM
Soaring spirits! Exquisite
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Date: 7/9/2021 1:07:00 AM
That’s so beautiful Victor, a song from your heart it certainly is… Belle
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:57:00 PM
So true and poignant!
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:26:00 PM
A lyric of passionate love, Victor, beautiful in its longing and fulfillment:)
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