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Love At First Sight

When the breeze kissed him through the window , the streaks of his hair swayed and did glow. When he noticed me amidst the flock, he was stunned, his eyes didn't blink. His sharp eyes pierced my strong heart His cute smile kept my worries apart When I tried to distract my sight, he thundered, with his voice bright. Though there were people round us, not to everyone he expressed and not everyone got impressed. Without having spoken a word I entered into his world Since I had fallen in love without any reasons, I pondered, "is this related to a past life connection?" However I knew his glimpse, a passing cloud The seeds of bliss he sowed will be flowering forever Dedicated to a stranger's baby, whom I met while travelling in a public transport, who wanted me to keep seeing and smiling at him... He didn't allow me to see anywhere... It was really a lovely feel to be loved by an unknown baby...

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Date: 3/13/2021 5:55:00 AM
Woww... What a beautiful poem Supraja... It had happened to me too... I could just imagine the moment....that is the magic of babies, they make us forget the world around us.. for that one moment.. and the cute smile they give at you.. oh myy... God bless.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/11/2021 10:25:00 AM
Stupendous poem. Loved it right through.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/11/2021 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor... Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/11/2021 8:40:00 AM
A enchanting moment, suspended in time... I've had similar experiences and it's wonderful that you've captured that time with this lovely poem. God bless you with love, Gina
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/11/2021 7:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Regina... Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/11/2021 6:19:00 AM
Hi Supraja, I could just picture the whole scene. I don't why but I believe in love at first sight ( maybe not a deep love, but make a connection with someone ). I guess that's the hopeless romantic in me. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
So true, Alexis... But the kids of strangers sometimes make us believe in it...
Date: 3/11/2021 4:42:00 AM
I can just imagine that scene. I know when it happens those moments are like treasures. Beautifully done, Supraja--engraved in your memory.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/11/2021 5:02:00 AM
You are right!!! Such a beautiful moment!!! So glad you liked it...

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