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Love At First Sight

As my heart skipped a note eyeing her Blossoming a red rose inside Can’t even sway my naughty eyes from peeping Did she ever noticed my sheepish looks? Elegantly moving from one bosom to another Followed by my eyes like a slave Good, she never discerned my wishful stare Haunted dreamily I walked and tripped. Inside me a storm whirling in silence Joy of love lurching my feeble trunk Kindling a heavenly fever in my mind Lest I fall, my friend, please hold me tight. Met our eyes in a trice, a lightning hit Nay, she pulled her sword back in a flash Oh my God, I can’t stare the stars so bright Perhaps, she an angel from mighty heaven. Quest to know her mind I wander without fear Rest, like a magic I can’t conceive Staggering my ship she came directly to me Tripping my drinks and the glass all over. Upset with what she did to me in haste Veil, she took and rub my faintly beating heart Wish that moment will last for aeon Xanthin face she pleaded for an apology Yes, my friend, there my story of love started Zesting my life with the love at the very first sight. Won second place in Abecedarian Contest Poetry Contest sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 3/7/2020 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Jenish! xxoo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/7/2020 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Connie..
Date: 3/4/2020 12:03:00 AM
Jenish, love the verse, great theme an flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/4/2020 12:12:00 AM
Thank you Eve for that delightful comment..
Date: 2/10/2020 7:18:00 PM
well crafted poem...from the first awkward moments of attraction and not knowing how to approach them, the fear of rejection to the love... beautiful write Jenish… best wishes in the contest :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your wonderful comment..
Date: 2/10/2020 11:43:00 AM
By the letter 'N' you had worn me out already. ~ Getting too old for flaming affairs! Smiles, gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 9:15:00 PM
Lol..My dear friend, your body may be old but mind still young..Still there are chances for flaming affairs..hahaha..Thank you..
Date: 2/10/2020 8:12:00 AM
Emotions dancing in love and romance--well done, Jennish--all the best.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for support and kind words..
Date: 2/10/2020 5:55:00 AM
You composed this well Jenish, some I've seen seem to just be a list of words from a to z. Good luck Tom
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your kind words...

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