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Love and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance

(Rhyming Senryu) Cold and careful hands Dismantle love’s elements Methodically The eye detecting Fragile fractured copper threads Dispassionately Concentrating fire Melting metal, soldered wire Mending circuitry Testing, one, two, three The current, interrupted Now set flowing free How beautifully Cool flux and hot flame restore Conductivity Love’s analogy Motorcycle maintenance Electricity by Gail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/26/2015 7:37:00 AM
Gail, thank you for sharing your poem. Happy Thanksgiving. Love Skat
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Gail Foster
Date: 11/26/2015 1:55:00 PM
And thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem, Skat. All good wishes to you x

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