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Love and Pain

Pain the word carved into his heart Betrayed the word knifed into his back Revenge the word slit into his throat Lies the word stained on his bloody lips Hollow the word scratched into his chest Love the word written into his skin a maze of lines stiched-up criss crossing his skin... the murderer of his heart?.... why, he was a crash car heart... pain was his valentine his love... and she? she became it all in the shape of a goddess in the rhythm of his heart... an infection a massacre something perhaps he too could love... she was criss crossed lines and stiched up scars... she was pain in perfect rhythm.... Love she carved it on his heart.... with her own...

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John Rhinem

Date: 6/15/2009 12:38:00 PM

~This genre of "Yours," is a medicinal ointment for many I believe; including "Your Priceless Self, Dear & Precious Madison Thomer!!!":):)~I feel as I have told "You" before, that I have been blessed to have met "You!!!":):)~And, I always look deeply forward to "Your" new post!!?:):)~So, "You Have A Beautiful Day In Southern Cal, Wrapped In Joy, Happiness & Love~Always, To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!"~"Bye Beautiful & Gifted Madison Thomer!!!":):) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 6/15/2009 12:29:00 PM

Smile~A love as deep as the deepest well....A love the way it that it should be....A love, that every heart dreams, can be held within their own arms, forevermore!!!:):)~Well Mrs. Poe, "Your" writings qualities no longer surprise myself anymore~It is "Your Mastery of Emotions," which does amaze me within "Your" ability to transcribe them so brilliantly onto the pad, of written, from the deepest of "Your Beautiful Soul!!!":):)....Cont....