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Love and Pain

LOVE AND PAIN To feel the stain, of love yet again, with a heart stabbed, in pain. Shattered scattered dreams, as a candle of hope, is melting in fears, burning, dripping with tears. Smokey ashes of love, an SOS to the stars and heaven above. Collective clouds of sentimental memories, and dark shadows under moonlit rays. Feelings coldly churning into stormy gusts, choking me is my loving trusts. Spiritually sinking into darkness, closing defensive doors to sadness. Awaiting destiny in question, why?, as inside my soul, I search and cry. Until I find another seed, a seed that grows with loving need, that special soul, to fulfil a heartfelt hole, belief, of love a miracle in life, and again to feel love and pain

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Date: 12/3/2019 11:03:00 PM
So nice. Each line touched me. I admire.
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 12/4/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for enjoying my poetry
Date: 9/9/2019 6:57:00 PM
Oh , so glad I was led to this beautiful, meaningful poem. Well written! :)
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 9/9/2019 11:40:00 PM
Thankyou for beautiful comment
Date: 9/9/2019 10:31:00 AM
Your lines expectedly weigh in tonnes and your consistency has made you a master of masters in this act. This is beyond compliments. Good work mate. An absolute beauty.
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 9/9/2019 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so so much for your compliments and for enjoying my style of poetry
Date: 8/29/2019 6:05:00 AM
Love and Pain...well expressed..
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 8/30/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment and hope you enjoy my style of poetry

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