Love & Lust

Interesting write filled with wisdom, David, thought provoking. Personally though, I believe love ameliores, rather than implores. I think need implores. Unfortunately "ameliores" is French. :) In English, it would be ameliorate. (bummer) Yours is an interesting intake non-the-less.

This has to be a favorite of mine David.. Thank you for taking the time out to read mine as well.. wilma

NIce how this rhymes in short phrases. I wish I could stay and see more poems this morning but i Have to rush to work. thanks for your comment. luv, andrea

Can't believe my "friends" thought it was fine for PD to slam me when I never said anything public against her. Very sad to see you among them.

Your poetry was a pleasure to read today David. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol

well written poem! enjoyed

You express well the trials of falling in love. Like the form you used to convey your messages concisely and accurately, David. I leave for a vacation tomorrow and won't be back for a couple weeks. I may check in from time to time to read poetry, but most of my hours will be spent with family and old friends. Hope you're having a great summer! Love, Carolyn

Magical David.. u expressed each live so well and leaves the reader wondering which it is for them.. enjoyed my friend.. with luv..

LoVELY DAVID, a wonderful way of saving time at the end. Moments to be cherrished to any given fool.-SKAT

I love your recipe of lust and love. .in this world of fools :)..and tnks for being patient enough to read my unfinished poem,its late here so I fix it tomorrow,yet,thanks for stopping by to read,Have a great night,gotta go now,I'm sleepy :) C.C.