Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

- Love and Care -Collabration -

Its easy to become what you fear..
                 Could bring you down,or shift you into high gear

                          Embrace the hope you see in others..
               A neighborhood filled with loving sisters and brothers

                              Love and care for eachothers..
                      Always a helping hand and some leftovers

               Smiling faces in the streets,children playing in paradise
                     Come on over,check it out while we roll the dice..  








June 29th 2012

Anne Lise & Arild Andresen

* Collabration with my lovely hub
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Debbie Duncan March 6, 2013 at 10:44 PM Love it Anne,,,, but I think this is not your Paradise poem, ? thank you Anne for always reading my words xoxo ;} Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2013 at 2:39 AM Debbie, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox // love from Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne August 28, 2012 at 12:17 PM you write so well together : ) Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2012 at 12:35 PM Jack, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun August 3, 2012 at 10:35 AM A wonderful rhyme poem again about love. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2012 at 10:38 AM Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Vicky Tsiluma July 25, 2012 at 11:23 PM Lovely collaboration Anne Lise - lovely message! Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2012 at 2:29 AM Vicky, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Bl Devnath July 21, 2012 at 1:13 PM Oh! lovely atmosphere, well done. i too deserve the World so. Thanks......... for this wonderful poem of few words. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2012 at 1:28 PM bl. - thank you for visit and comments - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cecilia Macfarlane July 9, 2012 at 3:31 PM Anne Lise & Arild....Lovely and moving write! Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2012 at 7:06 AM Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock July 8, 2012 at 11:38 AM Nice to do a collabration with your hub. Lucky you that he loves poetry. My husband would look at me like --are you nuts--anyway enjoyed the poem from both of you. We were talking about Norway and the beauty of the fiords the other day and it got me thinking of you and how beautiful some of your area would be. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2012 at 1:35 PM Phyllis, yes Norway is beautiful but cold.....welcome! Thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Tania Gainous July 2, 2012 at 12:08 PM this is beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2012 at 12:36 PM Tania, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kerry Singleton July 2, 2012 at 2:32 AM I love this Ann, fear is such a theif! Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2012 at 2:33 AM kerry, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Dan Kearley July 1, 2012 at 10:47 PM Wow! Look at you two! Is this your first collab? Very nice... And very uplifting.. Great job! :o) Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2012 at 1:47 AM Dan, thank you for visit and comments. - Yes the first. - oxox f.e.f. love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2012 at 12:21 PM have a warm sunday even if it's cold, anne!...huggs to you!..:) Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2012 at 12:24 PM It is cold !!!! (comming) - oxox love Anne-Lise

James Marshall Goff July 1, 2012 at 5:49 AM Anne Lise & Arild....well done! I agree! I always cook xtra food to share!!! God Save Norway! (We have mucho citizens of Norwegian ancestry here in the great free state of Minnesota) jimbo Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2012 at 8:38 AM Jimbo, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

The Situation June 30, 2012 at 6:45 PM sorry no crap games. Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2012 at 5:02 AM T-S - thank you for visit. - oxox Anne-Lise

Toquyen Harrell June 30, 2012 at 4:49 PM Yes, take care of each other. I love that! Thanks Anne-Lise. You always have wise words to say. I love it. Have a great weekend too. Love ya, Toquyen :)) Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 4:54 PM Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andre Sanders June 30, 2012 at 2:04 PM I can relate to this poem on so many levels. It's so hard to be positive when all your living around is negative energy. I'm from a place where a smile can be your olny friend. Thanks for the smile Anne. Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 3:53 PM Andre, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany June 30, 2012 at 11:06 AM some simple thoughts ,but very worthy in our day to day life .thank you for sharing .jk Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 11:10 AM jk. - :) thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins June 30, 2012 at 8:53 AM Anne Lise - So happy! love, Kathy Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 10:10 AM Kathryn, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Ravi Sathasivam June 30, 2012 at 7:21 AM Lovely Anne. Great work and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 10:08 AM Ravi, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud June 30, 2012 at 6:12 AM what an affectionate write from a pair ruled by wam love.. enticing me no end, anne and arild!...:) grreeeat job!.:) huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 6:14 AM Nette, thank you for visit and sweet comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Goode Guy June 30, 2012 at 4:15 AM dice it is indeed. ;-) Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 4:18 AM G.G. - thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jermaine Kirimi June 30, 2012 at 2:44 AM A VERY LOVELY WRITE Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 2:49 AM Jermaine,thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Nickle Read June 30, 2012 at 2:43 AM collaboration in answer, my lady love and I, are both smiling from ear to ear. We thankyou, great poem. Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 2:48 AM David, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox Anne-Lise

Doreen Wright June 29, 2012 at 9:35 PM GREAT ENDING TO A LOVELY POEM!! AWESOME Anne Lise and Arild Anderson :-) Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 2:40 AM Doreen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Elizabeth Wesley June 29, 2012 at 7:38 PM Some words and thoughts to considerthat help us to get along in this world. Hice one myfriend! Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 2:40 AM Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Joann Grisetti June 29, 2012 at 5:58 PM A lovely neighborhood. It gets so muggy here no one goes outside in the summer. i moss the playing children. Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2012 at 2:38 AM Joann, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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