Love

Lost bearing the ship 
                          crashes into the reef 
                          lovers in wild love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 4:36 AM
Very nice Haiku...good imagery...All the best Vasudevan
Desikachari Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Thank you, Michael, for the nice comments.
Ashley Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 9:18 PM
A beautifully expressive Haiku. Wonderful imagery. ~Susan
Desikachari Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 10:46 PM
thank you very much, Susan, for those very encouraging words of appreciation.
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