Love

I pleaded-you enjoyed,
I cried-you laughed,
You pleaded-but I couldn't be Othello at your tears,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:04 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ulaaz - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bocsa Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 3:00 PM
Interesting contrast between enjoyed and tears.Congrat for understanding this face of love,Best regards,O.B
Robertzen Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Many thanks
Lariviere Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 1:07 PM
very well said, felt the emotion.
Robertzen Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Thank you.
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