Love

I didn't know where to start. Then the words filled my heart. How could love tear you apart? How can one be so broken? I thought love is to awoken. What about love at first sight? Now everybody's taking flight. What about dates and mates? Now it's hate and deadly fates. This is not how it's supposed to be. Let me tell you what love mean to me. Love is something you seek. Love is to keep. Love is to guide you through thick and weak. Love is to fix your broken heart. Love is to give you a brand new start. Love is to never keep you apart. There's someone there for you. Someone who's love is true. Someone who understand what you went through. This is what love means to me and should to you.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thank you for the reply Tatiana, I will look up your poems...Linda

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:29:00 PM

TATIANA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/18/2014 11:25:00 AM

This is such a beautiful, powerful, romantic write that I truly enjoyed. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/18/2014 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Pandita!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 7:19:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Tatiana. This was a great first poem. Love is such a powerful thing! Just a side note, your form would be better as a rhyme, abc for is when each word consecutively follows the alphabet. This is a great place to learn all these new forms, I hope you enjoy being here, learning, growing, and making wonderful new friends, I look forward to reading more of you ;) :)

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/18/2014 7:28:00 AM

Thank you,I didn't know understand what the forms were for.That's a big help!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:04:00 PM

I think, I have a poem on that site. I never understood the site. So I gave up on it. However, they had lots of cool stuff, poetry soup does not:)

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/17/2014 10:14:00 PM

I have 32 poems on there and I enjoy it a lot,I am also working on a story called Stolen on there,though I can't post the link but my username is tatianadavis755,I'd you ever get bored and want to read it then all you do is put www.allpoetry.com/tatiana_davis

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 9:59:00 PM

I am glad you are enjoying this site... :)

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/17/2014 10:02:00 PM

Yes,though I'd have to say allpoetry.com is a really good site too.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 9:48:00 PM

Tatiana,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/17/2014 9:55:00 PM

Thank you for welcoming me to poetry soup and I am enjoying it.I will check out your contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2014 1:14:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tatiana - I choose your first great & touching poem "Love" ! - Very well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tatiana Davis
Date: 8/17/2014 9:56:00 PM

Thank you for welcoming me to poetry soup and I also want to thank you for commenting and giving you opinion on my poem!