Love

Love is pure beauty...at least, that's what I thought at first...don't spend your time unwisely, searching for temporary love that's sugar-coated and fake...love is an unbreakable vow
Oh! But, I wanna experience love at first sight (OH STOHP WHINING) - I need to have a faithful mate very badly, but I must remain self-controlled and patient, for the time will come!
Vibrant sun smiles down on me...sun rays warm my heart of affection and heartfelt emotions - hatred is an unwanted guest! An annoying pest! It envies our everlasting love, blossoming like a flower in spring
Enlivened by your innocence and pleasurable friendship - does she truly love me or is is just my impossible-to-achieve dream I dream...caught under your wicked spell! You're an enchanting oath that I don't..loathe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Satterfield Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:03 PM
I love this . You are the most amazing writer so far that I have seen on here . I am new on here and only seen a few other people work but this is my favorite piece so far.
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June 10, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Thank you. I particular like this piece all the same. One of my favorite acrostics I've made in fact. (x -DWBness
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