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Love

Love is pure beauty...at least, that's what I thought at first...don't spend your time unwisely, searching for temporary love that's sugar-coated and fake...love is an unbreakable vow Oh! But, I wanna experience love at first sight (OH STOHP WHINING) - I need to have a faithful mate very badly, but I must remain self-controlled and patient, for the time will come! Vibrant sun smiles down on me...sun rays warm my heart of affection and heartfelt emotions - hatred is an unwanted guest! An annoying pest! It envies our everlasting love, blossoming like a flower in spring Enlivened by your innocence and pleasurable friendship - does she truly love me or is is just my impossible-to-achieve dream I dream...caught under your wicked spell! You're an enchanting oath that I don't..loathe

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Date: 6/10/2014 2:03:00 PM
I love this . You are the most amazing writer so far that I have seen on here . I am new on here and only seen a few other people work but this is my favorite piece so far.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/10/2014 2:20:00 PM
Thank you. I particular like this piece all the same. One of my favorite acrostics I've made in fact. (x -DWBness

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