Love

It's so confusing that it makes 
you cry
But you love him so much that 
your willing to fight 
It feels like heaven but at the 
same time your yelling
Cause you can't figure out why 
you love him that much
When a fight comes aboard 
You loose all control
Then you catch yourself crying 
and calling "Oh Lord!" 
Thats how love is it throws 
things at you
And you cant just say "no" or "i 
don't want you"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:42 PM
nicely said , and so true :) I think you are new , so I shall say well aboard the PoertrySoup ride :)
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March 17, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Hi Jolie, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Girl Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thank you
A   Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Jolie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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March 3, 2014 at 3:32 PM
An excellent first poem, welcome to the soup!
Girl Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks !
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February 27, 2014 at 3:03 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jolie - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Girl Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Thank you ! I look forward to reading all the different poetry !
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 3:28 PM
I like this. That's how life is - love can make you cry, for joy or... @3rd line from bottom typo 'as' instead of 'at'? cu around.
Girl Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Thank you for the feedback !
A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Olesya, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Girl Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Thank you ! I will defiently stop by to read your poetry ! Really excited about meeting new poets and reading different styles !
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