Love

Love is true love that lures you, not you alluring it Don’t try to find love, let love find you to hook. First sight love forces you not to fall, you just fall, First sight love is potent but have a second look. Love is like butterflies who’re not as civilized as men Who needs half happiness and twice the longevity. Have a look at butterflies flirting happily around sane, Settling down nowhere but full of joy and not longevity. Love is silent, language or tongue hasn’t power To speak what love incites by a kiss, a glance An eye, or a sound, a touch, a smile or a flower Even the tears, the messengers of grief and trance More eloquent than a hundred words to compare. Love is more than a common noun to suffice It’s a verb to care, share, help, suffer, and sacrifice A woman in travail has sorrow till her hour is come As she delivers, pain gone; Oh, the love of a mom.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date: 31-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Fifth Place Win Contest: Three or more stanzas by Sheri Fresonke Harper
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Browning Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 9:59 AM
great use of analogies and imagery here - great poem! kirbykirb~
Harper Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Good contrast in the way we see love, Dr. Ram Mehta. Good emotion and use of form too. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I enjoyed reading this one.. Sameh
Smith Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Hi Dr. Ram Mehta, your poem was penned beautifully on the subject of love. Enjoyed it! Thanks for the congrats!
Beam Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 12:13 PM
thanks for comment and I really enjoyed this poem Love an all round winner
Mason Gibbs Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Very Nice poem , great job
Jackson Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Eloquent poem describing love. Last stanza is beautiful. Best wishes, Linda x
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 4:32 PM
very nicely done, taking all those ways to look at love. I see high marks in your future for this one!!
Horne Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 1:31 PM
lovely write, Dr Ram
Flannery Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Very wise and insightful poem Doctor Ram. Good advice to the young as well as the old. Love is so powerful..
Mohammed Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Strong write with lots of lessons that can be derived. Loved your poem Dr. Ram and best wishes for the new year.
Parker Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 9:21 AM
from the book "The Prophet" " If love finds you worthy, it will find you"
Maverick Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 3:18 AM
You have filled this write with most powerful descriptions Dr Ram, also thank you for the congratulations..
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