Love

Snowflakes falling one by one
pure, white and silent
appear plain and simple.

Complexity-a mystery
viewed from a far.

In eye of the beholder
a very fragile, dainty piece
beauty inexpressible.

Grass is disappearing
tree tops are soon covered.

To stand in awe of loveliness
that hides the bare of winter
and makes the world look perfect
for a long as it is in it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 5:43 AM
The shivers of winter are countered by the warmth of your words.... Great writing..... welcome to the Soup.... Jake
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October 17, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Hi Renee Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 17, 2013 at 4:26 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Renee ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 17, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Very nice read
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October 17, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Renee, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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