Love

Love is like rain it comes down in a surprise It hits you like Karma the tension begins to rise You feel like your drifting deep into mid air You feel really silly and show a lot of care Love can make you act strangely or feel some type of way But when you have true love it never get’s away

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Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 1:45:00 PM

Hi Santeria, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2013 8:58:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Santeria! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Michael Hayward

Date: 9/17/2013 11:05:00 PM

I can relate to your poem! Nice

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2013 5:30:00 PM

A lovely poem Santeria, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@