Love

Love is like rain it comes down in a surprise
        It hits you like Karma the tension begins to rise
        You feel like your drifting deep  into mid air 
        You feel really silly and show a lot of care
       Love can  make you act strangely or feel some type of way
     But when you have true love it never get’s away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 18, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Hi Santeria, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 18, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Santeria! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 17, 2013 at 11:05 PM
I can relate to your poem! Nice
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September 17, 2013 at 5:30 PM
A lovely poem Santeria, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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