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Love

True love is a Heart and a Spade Because your true colors will never fade Its never giving up even if your betrayed Either way true motivations will be displayed I know that i will not be told how to behaive I won't let anyone turn me into a slave Pull on my soul like a dog on a chain Put you in my shoes so you can feel my pain If you point the finger you are probily to blame That is probily why this world is filled with shame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 11:20:00 AM
won't let anyone turn me into a slave Pull on my soul like a dog on a chain i understand the core meaning of these two lines...the fact abt true and betrayed love,,excellent wrk
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Date: 12/7/2011 4:24:00 PM
Impressive how you kept that rhyme going for 10 lines. Anyway, a lot of good messages in there, good job on this one; very critical.  -KMD
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