Love

When you think somebody loves you,
You know it's true.
When all that special someone wants to do,
Is spend all day with you.

Through thick and thin,
Or fat and thin as a pin.
They'll be there through it all, 
Helping you not to fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Creative and expressive thoughts on love, Rachel
Benson Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:18 AM
Yes, so true, the feeling of love, makes you want to do nothing but see your love and assist them. Very beautiful poem, I enjoyed the read.
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June 28, 2011 at 4:17 AM
Excellent writing Rachel. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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